lisahultengren

The positive/negative space picture show clearly that the article has too many pictures that are stuffed in the middle and out to the sides. There is just too much going on. They should change the font of the title because it is competing too much with the Vogue-title and everything else. The pictures down on the left and the middle should be pulled up and in, so that it creates some open space around the article. The red box should have a quote instead of just saying “exhibition”. The red girl should also be pulled up and in to give more space to the text.